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EDIT: Fixed the spelling errors.
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Beautiful work as usual. My only complaint is that you have horizontal lines on the bottom right sail whereas all the other sails have only vertical lines.

I love the red ink splatters to help bring the waves out against the ship without overpowering it.

I'm wondering if the railing on the near side of the ship needs the bottom line highlighted and if it might not come across as a rail but rather a ladder strapped to the side of the ship. Mainly due to the fact that there are no other hightlights on this side.

That last bit was mostly to fill up the 100 word minimum. Keep up the amazing work... I love the Jabberwocky can't wait to see the rest of this one.
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richie-on-a-mission Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
can I buy it somewhere? i can't find it ^^
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EranFolio Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I'm afraid not, it was a student project. Maybe someday.
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richie-on-a-mission Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
that would be really nice! your jabberwocky book is only available on lulu or can I buy it somewhere else?
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EranFolio Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Just Lulu, I'm afraid. =)
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yakumoSoul Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, a sequel project. Good marketing ~_^. You're pretty good at creating eery children's book graphics. The front cover does appear a little empty in places, taken by itself. As a book read with cover held towards listening children however, it's perfect.
Typography of the title looks good. I'd shift the title more to the right to better fill the cover space, and it might open up a slight bit more attention for the characters on the bow. Now eye contact starts at the mast's top, then goes down along the sails and ropes towards the characters, but bumps into the title before reaching them.
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EranFolio Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Hmm. I'll try that.
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j0s2m21 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2010
wow, this is really great work. I like it a lot!
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2010
You're really good at creating a graphic world for Carroll's nonsense!

I shall be eagerly waiting for further fits!
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mechacharibdys Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2010
Beautiful!!

Lewis Carroll is spelled with two l's and two r's.
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EranFolio Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Whoops, thank you for catching that. =)
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KyudaimeHokage Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2010
I absolutely love your style of art! :)
I tried explaining it one time to a friend and the closest I could describe it was similar in some ways to the art style of Mirror Mask, but that it's still it's own style all together.
I just adore how you use black ink and antique tones!
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PropaGandhi101 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2010
i think the lines of ink on the left side distract from the picture
maybe if they were a bit less pronounced?
but it is the back of the book so i guess its not that big of a deal
love your artwork btw!
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EranFolio Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
I think I agree. =)
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PropaGandhi101 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2010
how do you land gigs like that?
are you just friends with the author?
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EranFolio Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Friends with... Oh, lol. Lewis Carroll has been dead for a hundred years. His work is public domain.
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PropaGandhi101 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2010
oh shit.
those conversations must be awkward.
have you gotten stuff published?
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EranFolio Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Indeed I have. =)

Conversations with Carroll are usually nonsense anyway.
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PropaGandhi101 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2010
where would i find your published works?
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EranFolio Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
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