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The Jabberwocky Page 6 Spreadby *EranFolio

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Enjoying The Jabberwocky? It's now available for purchase at Lulu.com here, [link] spruced up and with some additional content added. I took all of your suggestions into account, and I came up with the reasonable price of under $10.

~Thekidwithatisum Aug 4, 2012

Is it me or are there gears in some places?

~Kimono-chimera Jan 25, 2013 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

I'm pretty sure that the story was intentionally given a steam punk feel, yes. And if you don't know what Steam punk is, feel free to google it, so you get a better definition than just "fantasy-based, future Victorian era design". I love the style, but it's hard to put into words.

~janwed Oct 29, 2011

ohh,, you made the whole storyboard...what a beautiful idea..and great details, nice touches... thank you for sharing my dear...

~MaKaM Feb 13, 2009

Awesome!

~yakumoSoul Jan 26, 2009 Hobbyist General Artist

The style feels familiar from the bat, well suited to a children's book. So I am glad that you plan to make the book for real.
Somehow I am overlooking the rhime which served as a constant and stable rithm in the original poem, to which a child could cling even during the frightening moments. I see you have made clever use of text sizes. Perhaps the rhime could be enhanced by repeated text positions (1. upper left - 2. lower right), or dividing each poem paragraph in black-white-black-white text colours. Take well into account how adjacent pages combine the texts, though I think I needn't point it out.
In any case, this is definately a book that should be read aloud. Graphically I have no critisism at all.
*flollops*